Misbalance is the first book in Amber Peterson’s Balance series. This fantasy crosses galaxies to come to Earth. The princess of a distant planet was sent to Earth to hide. Her memories were wiped away to keep her safe, and her powers bound. Now, something has come...someone has come to bring her “home.” If she is to survive what is coming...she’ll need to find a way to unleash her powers.
Misbalance has a beautiful cover that depicts a place of beauty. The sky has swirling blues and purples with stars mixed in. Two moons float on either side of galactic clouds and stars. Underneath them sits a range of mountains in the background. In the foreground, a once beautiful garden now lying desolate with a fountain that still flows.
Misbalance is told from the first person perspective and depicts Mandy’s story. Mandy is just your everyday high schooler, but today? Everything for her is about to change. Her day is about to go from “good” to down right terrible. An assailant attacks her school and takes her sister hostage. But it’s Mandy he wants.
Mandy is a fighter which readers will quickly see. Her younger sister Chloe is no twittering little girl who needs to be told twice to run from a bad situation. Rather refreshing to be honest. But while Mandy has some skills, she’s no match for this particular fighter. What happens next...utter heartbreak and shock.
When the news breaks Mandy is able to get free from her captivity, but now she is on her own. But it won’t be long before she finds some help in the form of a young man and his...drunk of a father. While now she has a place to hide and recover, her life will never be the same.
Of course, Misbalance isn’t solely Mandy’s story. No, we get multiple other characters who will make appearances as well. The first of the others we’ll be introduced to is Rose. She’s a feisty character and one we quickly took a shine to. Rose is strong, but she has her own demons that she’s battling. Big the question quickly becomes...what is her connection to Mandy?
Misbalance is a mix of a coming-of-age and YA fantasy novel with sci-fi elements mixed in. The magic from the primary main character is slow in coming, but you just need to exercise a touch of patience. Mandy has no idea who she really is, but the truth is coming to the surface piece by piece.
While Mandy is “hiding” from the world after her loss, the young man she crossed paths with helps her find a safe haven. Granted his father is someone to be avoided. Readers, beware there is abuse of a character or two in this book. As noted previously, Brian’s father is a drunk and when he gets deep into his cups he’s violent.
Readers will learn more about Brian and his backstory concerning what happened to completely break their family. It’s a heartbreaking story, but it is by no means an excuse for why he is made to endure what he must. With Mandy, Brian finds some happiness and a few moments of peace. Romance sparks up as well. The romance is clean for the time being. Can’t say for sure that it will stay clean, but for right now this book reads like a suitable YA fantasy for most readers.
As Misbalance continues Mandy makes quite a few discoveries. She has quite a few close calls with death and capture, but she discovers not all is as it seems. Rose and Moz are some dynamic characters who have a connection to Mandy. Author Peterson fills readers in on their history and clues readers in on why Rose is the way that she is.
Luke is another character readers will learn about. We won’t tell you much about him right now, but he’s an interesting character, too. Just...beware his younger brother. He is the definition of “unhinged.” Luke’s brother will probably have your jaw on the floor a couple of times in this book. But one thing is for sure...you will never be bored when he’s on the page.
Overall, Misbalance is an engaging and easy-to-read novel. Author Peterson does an overall good job with the details. But there are some details that we need more of. The time aspect of the story is hard to follow. You’ll think that only days or weeks have passed, but more time than that has gone by. We needed time to be more noted than it is.
We aren’t the biggest fan of Mandy throughout the book. Maybe it’s because of the over usage of the word “snapped.” Mandy does a lot of it - snapping. It honestly gets annoying and makes her appear to be a petulant teenager. Granted, yes, the word is used with other characters in their speech as well. However, it is overly used with Mandy. She’s constantly snapping at everyone, and add in she wants to view herself as the victim in certain scenarios...it gets exhausting. We wish that the author had used different adjectives in place of “snapped” that could have just as accurately represented it.
Misbalance is an interesting beginning to the Balance series. Reading the blurb gave us “Sailor Moon” vibes, but that’s not what you get when you actually get into this book. Author Peterson gives readers more than a few jaw-dropping surprises which will definitely keep you on your toes.
Misbalance ends on a mild cliffhanger. It’s enough to tease readers into being curious as to what happens next in the story, but not enough to leave you howling for more. Author Peterson leaves readers with the knowledge that Mandy is getting stronger now that she’s unlocked her powers. The threat is real, but there are still pieces of the puzzle that remain to be uncovered. It’ll be interesting to see where things go from here.
Pros:
- Interesting storyline
- Nice cast of characters
- Twists and surprises
- Fantasy element of the story is a gradual build
Cons:
- Passage of time is vague and difficult to decipher quantitatively speaking
- Over usage of the word “snapped”
4.5 stars
