Thursday, April 11, 2024

Once and Future Queen Review Spotlight



Welcome to the tour for Once and Future Queen by C.M. Hano. Read on for details!

 


 Once and Future Queen is the first book in C.M. Hano’s Constellina series. War is brewing in Constellina and infighting swirls all around. Who do you trust? Where can you turn when it appears that trust is something easily tossed aside? Or is it? Once and Future Queen takes readers to a fantasy world where the threat to this princess’s life is about to create a whole new shift.

Once and Future Queen provides a rather enticing cover. Readers are presented with what appears to be a dagger or a sword with magic swirling around it. Are these two images preludes of what is to come? Is there some hidden significance to it? While the cover may tease you closer, the blurb unfortunately...leaves some to be desired. But the story holds potential, so let’s see where things go, shall we?

Once and Future Queen is told from dual POV – Gwen’s and Alex’s. Gwen is preparing to assume the role of being queen. Sounds pretty straight forward, right? She’s about to come of age, and then she will be able to take the throne and hold the power that is hers to control. First things first though...reach the age of 24 and then get rid of the sniveling worm who is the Lord Regent. No, we’re not exaggerating...author Hano sees fit to show that this “man” has no qualms bloodying the heir. Makes you think...he really doesn’t believe that she’ll live long enough to claim the throne and see him lose a particular piece of his anatomy. What does he know that you don’t? Also, why doesn’t Gwen do more to check him? Things that make you go...hmmmmmm.

This novel shifts POV between Gwen and Alex. Alex is a dragon shifter. He’s also an “infamous” Mafia King of Gwen’s kingdom. He’s there at the behest of his father, but Alex has taken on his own agenda, and it’s one that doesn’t line up with his father. Sounds like some trouble brewing in the family tree, huh? Well, there’s more to this than just Alex looking to step out of his father’s shadow. There’s some sticky family history here, and it’s worth reading more about.

The beginning of this story, overall, is pretty interesting. You get to see the play of powers at work and who truly holds it. Apparently Gwen holds little to none, meanwhile, Alex appears to hold quite a bit. This is showcased by the way that he handles particular situations in the beginning.

Readers, know that this book is an urban fantasy romance mixed with some medieval elements/aspects to it. We say this because you have modern technology – phones, internet, casinos with slot machines, and the like alongside more mundane aspects from a less technologically advanced time. Does this bring it’s own unique element to the story? Yes, it does. However, it creates a stir of confusion as well. You get settled into one aspect of the story and your brain says “medieval-ish” times, and then you get something modern like phones and video calls thrown at you and everything goes out the window. LOL!

For this reader, Gwen is a difficult character to truly get behind. She has her moments of appeal, but then it just reads like she’s snarky and sarcastic just to be that way. If there was a basis for the attitude – that someone has tried to mold her to be more submissive and controlled, we might be able to see it. But other than a couple of interactions with the Lord Regent...it’s just not there for us.

She’s quick to flip, too. One minute she’ll trust you, and then you say the wrong word (yes, singluar) and she’s turning on you and calling you a liar.

There are some...race-”ist” elements of where she has a particular negative viewpoint of all shifters simply because they are shifters. Granted, she’s been told a story that was a lie, but her disdain for shifters is rampant throughout the story. But we can only deduce that this is the author’s twist on a familiar fairytale as well. You’ll see what we mean, because one of the characters Gwen briefly interacts with points it out.

Alex is the more interesting of the characters...well, that is until his brother makes a surprise appearance. Alex is a dragon shifter. Yes, you get to see him spread his wings, and even partially shift. It’s disappointing that he never shifts completely, but there’s a story behind that, and you’ll get to discover this in due time in the story. It’s a sad story, but apparently, when it comes to Alex, he’s packed chock full of sad stories. Can he get a win? Probably not.

When it comes to details...this book is missing quite a few. There are some details that are added in later in the book that serve little to no purpose. While there are other places in this story that needed more detail to aid in transitions and give the story more body. A key example is the pointing out of headlines saying that Gwen has “run off” with her shifter lover and that the Lord Regent claims she intends to “abdicate” her throne. But then there’s no more headlines concerning her bizarre disappearance. Why is this? There needed to be more attention to the details and fleshing out of this story. Would the book have been longer? Yes, but it would have benefited as well.

The dialogue and the conversations are also more than a little bit of a struggle. It’s hard to really grasp who is talking when multiple characters are interacting in the same scene. You have to be extremely zoned in to make sure that you don’t get anyone confused. This reader had to reread certain paragraphs more than once to get everyone lined up correctly for who was speaking. It just needed more structure, but it just came off as disjointed.

Once and Future Queen has potential, but as it is...this book is really lacking. The romance angle is okay, the overall storyline has potential, but it needs to come together to create the whole picture that is being angled for. This book ends on a mild “cliffhanger.” It’s really not much of a cliffhanger, but the intent is to leave readers eager for more. There is definitely drama brewing around not just Gwen, but the two men she’s pulled into her orbit. You can pretty much guess that someone is going to get their heart broke, and odds are...it won’t be Gwen.

Once and Future Queen is an okay book. Will we be running to grab book two when it comes out? Probably not. Walk? Yeah. Run...eh, not likely. We’ll have to see if book two improves on book one’s rough start, because there is potential, but this book...it’s just not reaching it at this point and time.


Pros:


  • Nice romance
  • Interesting storyline
  • Nice amount of dragon focus


Cons:


  • FMC is hard to like
  • Details are lacking to truly bring this story to life
  • Dialogue tends to be hard to follow
  • Title doesn’t tie into story


3.5 out of 5 stars






Once And Future Queen (Constellina Book 1)

Publication Date: August 2022

Genre: Fantasy Romance

  • Unfated Fated Mates

  • Touch Her/Him & 💀

  • Dragon Shifters

  • Rivals to Lovers

  • Spice

A war is brewing...

Twenty years ago, training for war and the looming siege of the Sagittarian Court began for the humans of Constellina.

Present-day…

Twenty-four-year-old Gwen is determined to take her place as Queen and lead her armies into battle against the Dracane Kingdom. King Outher, the ruler of the Dracane Kingdom, has slaughtered, invaded, and placed many dragon shifters throughout the human realm, ready to take it over when the time is right.

When a marriage proposal from the Lirian Court Prince is discussed, Gwen must prepare for a masquerade with the help of hera two best friends; Princess Victoria and Princess Dilliha. A handsome stranger approaches her for a dance and initially whisks her off her feet. Upon leaving the ballroom to have a private conversation, Gwen finds herself in a perilous situation where she has to fight for her life.

Alexxander

As the infamous Mafia King of the Sagittarian Court cities, Alexxander reigns over his territory with three laws: don't break any of his rules and you will meet the god of death.

When a proposition from a human prince turns into a command from his father, Alexxander finds himself at the palace on the night of a masquerade ball. Using his shifter powers, he glamours his wings and horns in order to find the human he was sent to kill.

This is an enemies-to-lovers dark fantasy romance novel at 70,000 words. There are trigger and content warnings at the very beginning of the book, so please read those before diving into this action-packed, magical, steamy adventure.

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